I'll be honest.

The track is pretty boring, this reminds me in my older days, I'm not saying I'm a pro now, since I need to learn a lot yet to be proclaimed Pro, but as a listener, I wouldn't give it a second listen.

The Hi Hat is a bit too loud for my taste, overall it was recorded well, but the song itself is pretty boring.

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Der Mystik's Music

PDM, thx for the constructive critism. I know its very basic, there wasn't a lot of instruments at all in the track, maybe like 9 or 10 at most. Any tips for my next track? By the way how does the master sound on your system?

EDIT: By the way I only used 4bars at most not 8, maybe this might be why its boring?

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I'll pull through...

i like your track, its well constructed and equalized, however
you may need to work on your "attack & release" also to give it that warm feeling, you need more sounds to be involved, mix down needs to be improved, but overall its a nice tune, but pads are kind of "down" its like i would want to dance with that baseline, but not with those pads.

i am adding your icq on my list btw, lets see if can work something out.