Hey guys, check this tune out, Its my first one and i would really like to improve. Please review .

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=456214&T=6215

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OK

Not too keen on beginning with snares but the rest of the tune is good for your first one

Snares sound a bit too loud in the mix and strange breakbeat over main riff , which somehow does not fit with the structure of the tune.

I don't want to come across as sounding like an arse but it's the only way you learn I suppose

I actually apreciate really harsh reviews because like you said, you learn the most from them. thanx.

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..I like the quality of the synths that you used as the Lead.
..You should work on your arrangement though, the leads got a little over played
..I liked how you added a different drum pattern in your break
..I feel as though your drum style may set you apart from everyone else
..The next track you do, make sure you at least try to work on quality, so when you here feedback, you will know what to improve
..I noticed the baseline only shortly at the beginning. You should keep the baseline in there as it compliments your leads and drums. And make sure they sound a bit more fuller

Overall not bad for a 1st production...keep it up

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