I am working on this track, and I am halfway through it... but im kinda stuck in what to do more with it


Subtle - Subliminality SAMPLE

any comments would be nice

big THX to Vic Hyype for making this wonderful loop

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I spoke to you about this on msn mate, its komodo dragons stylee for definate, but what i suggest is you keep the bongos and perc, and go for the komodo dragons rock style bassdrum, your clap is already similar , do there rock style rhythms.

The bass i think could be made a little dirty, but thats just ideas.


good luck subtle its already damn awesome imo.

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good precs and bass.
don't like the pads.
3/5

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youve made some great percs man. bass is nice too. not sure about the pad at all.


having problems telling what style it is really and i dig those percs.

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yeh the pads are discussable.. thx for the feedback.. i may remove pads.. just may

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As said before, good percs and bass. A saw pad doesn't really fit into this tribal(ish) song imo. Not totally into this song, it's something...

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The percs are awesome like I told you before on MSN.

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Originally posted by Subtle I am working on this track, and I am halfway through it... but im kinda stuck in what to do more with it Subtle - Subliminality SAMPLE any comments would be nice big THX to Vic Hyype for making this wonderful loop

0:00 love your percussion.

0:16 the bass drum sounds OK.

0:45 Bass reminds me of an eighties song. sound good though. Pretty funky.

A hear a sounds of a pad that may be from absynth.

1:47 The main pads sound like a fake trumpet. Not sure if I like it.

3:33 like the the sound of the rythme that just came in. That is pretty catchy

4:17 Love that sound. But you know me, I love deep distorted grunting sounds

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Originally posted by Xenocreator_PG_ A hear a sounds of a pad that may be from absynth.

thx for feedback.. much appreciated.. and yeh.. its a Absynth PAD

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Hey Subtle

I really enjoyed this - the percussion sounds great.

Ill go against the norm and say I liked the pads, fits the song quite well I think. Maybe just change the timing of it a bit. The phased saw is good too - adds to the melody.
Pretty damn decent so far, definitely finish this.

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hey m8, the pad could be better, could turn it more into a nice phat synth, the overall song has a sad mood to it,
i like the beats, nice use of percs, and i like the back synth melody a lot, the rave one....
pretty kewl track m8, was turning into kinda push style near the end with that breakbeat and bass synth hehe
keep it up man
peace out

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let's finish this thing already!