Hey mark,

I quite like this tune - starts slowly but thats expected for a full mix.

Dont like the hard snare, although in the drop at 5:00 it sounds good - at the beginning and end it sounds bad, especially that double snare at the end of each section :<

3 minutes+ sounds awesome.

Really nice breakdown at 4 minutes, I would reduce the panning sweep though, it makes me feel queasy on headphones! just keep it in the same place, with the filter sweep you've got it will still sound interesting i think.

5:00 when the beat kicks in, it feels like its lacking something, dunno what! Maybe the main synth could be crisper / more treble in it? E.G 4:42 kinda thing - harsh to give us a taste of that nice synth then take it out for the drop

After that its all fine apart from the snare

If you could crit my first attempt would be great!

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=230022

ok i listened to it.
The intro is pretty cool.
I like the little effetcs u used (all the bzz, swiip...)
Why only 1 reply? your track is very good!
you know what? I will keep that one on my HD.
I like your sound Mark Sixma!!!

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thanks man! glad you like it

I don't know why no-one posts comments either :<
I do comment on tracks frequently

this sounds awesome....wow the breakdown is terrific....ur sounds sound fimiliar......awesome awesome....i love it...sounds proffesional...the eq mastering is awesome...

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indeed it sounds great.

I love the original, and this is a nice version.

However i really would want a stronger climax + lead sound.

further it's nice mate .

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