It needs more kick.

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u mean a harder kick ?

Hey this is pretty good stuff! Only downside is that phazer sorta dominates the whole tune... try and turn that effect down slightly! I would increase the volume of that kick... give it more punch! The whole track reminds me of the Brainbug stuff from 1997! Good work take onboard the above advice then it will sound better!

Thanx for listening and thanx for the comments
and wait for more

Expected more than that

where r u guyz

:S !

Don't be dis-heartened! Keep posting them up mate... I like your work!

Thanx dude .. still waiting for more comments

Can i say ..
U P !

not my style of tune, but i'll make a comment on the mixing.
the kick could be more prominent, it sounds like it's overpowered by the bass. try to make sure the kick / bass are pumping out exactly the same amount of power for the best sounding bottom-end.
the rest of the mix sounds really good, there's lots of panning + fx and everything fits well together.
the percussion could perhaps be thicker / have more layers.
keep it up mate!

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Thanx for listening dude and thanx for ur useful comments

and wait for ma next track