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| quote: | Originally posted by Xenocreator_PG_
You are driving this tune with the vocal samples. Have you thought about sampling some of the guitar licks of Dorset Perception & adding them to the tune. (just an idea)
I love the bass line of this tune. The bassline truely kicks ass! The samples get a little annoying in parts of the song. I think another rythme needs to be added & reduce the amount to samples in the song.
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Thanks So much for the feedback, unfortunatly i cant get a good enough cut of the guitar, so i couldnt add it, but thanks for the suggestion, i need to work on some more actions and samples going on so it is more enjoyable.
Although techno is mostly repitition, there should be a change in sounds often for it to be enjoyable
| quote: | Originally posted by Steven Hays
The kick would sound really bad coming in to a transition. It's just a double beat. |
Actually, the beat isnt a double beat, its an illusion, it has a bassless crunch before the kick, it mixes quite well with other techno 
| quote: | Originally posted by Steven Hays There's not much of the original in this song either. I think there should be maybe more of the melody, such as the guitar riff or more clear of vocals. It's just too repetitive for my liking. Good try.
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I need to work on it so it has the same sound, but has a variety, that is my biggest fault is that i dont change this around too much.
As for the guitar riff, its a bit hard to sample that as it includes a load of bass from sasha's edit
| quote: | Originally posted by gerrycueto
nice techno... sounds a bit dry... try using some Adam Beyer tracks as references and try some of the effects he's using... |
Funny you should say that  i sampled a few sounds from Adam Beyer's remix of Ben Sims - Manipulated the crunch sound before the beat is an example
| quote: | Originally posted by gerrycueto
like try wetting your sounds in a small room reverb.. or adding a slight delay echo on some of your sounds.
Also wanna make your techno beat has phat bass... take any drumloop low pass filter it really low like 100hz or lower... till all you feel is the bass... then boost some resonance so you feel more bass... it gives you that deep techno percussion bass. This trick is common in european techno. |
Thanks for the tips on that about techno, i need to do that, i notice that technique` in techno, just didnt know what it was
Overall, thanks so much for the feedback, more edits are on the way!
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