cool bass!, introduce the bass with a crash also .
nice synths so far and small details.
1.53 i expected some layerd perc, hihat and such there for drive, should start there imo, because you snare rolling
cool break with that choir or pad?
main lead synth is ok
overall this tune need some arrangement work, it lacks drive sometimes, sometimes the beat stops, perc lacks layers aswell, and i think the hihat is to loud but i am not very sure about that.
thats all mate .
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Aug-30-2004 15:12
staticblue
myloops.net
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France
cheers !
i admit there isnt so much percussion going at the same time .. but be sure i'll do something about that before mastering
thx for reply !
static
Aug-30-2004 15:31
staticblue
myloops.net
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France
any more advices before i work on it again ?
Aug-30-2004 16:41
BuRoLovesTrance
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Nitra, Slovakia
I have listened to this....Man this is something very cool a like it alot, keep it up
Aug-30-2004 17:17
staticblue
myloops.net
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France
thanx BuRo ! Happy you liked it
Aug-30-2004 17:31
davidemonin
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Salt Lake City, USA
Like the little intro. Nice work for the buildup until the breakdown. Nice smoothing pad. After the breakdown, well, not as energetic as in the original for the main melody, but still nice. Work that sound used for the main melody or used another sound for it maybe, don't like it as much.
Maybe the levels/mastering needs a little work, but can't really judge as well since this is only at 96kbps!
Overall, pas mal, c'est un bon effort. Bien de trouver un autre francais qui produis de la trance.
(content de voir que je suis pas le seul francais ici )
i agree, mastering does need work! it hasnt been done yet !
i will try and see what is wrong with the main parts dynamics too !
static blue
Aug-30-2004 18:38
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
sounding really good
ur version is more chilly than the original
but i still think this is a little empty :S , u can try changing the melody a little? or add a diff note to the bass? it sounds a little too much like the original to be honest...
keep workin at it