ok ill give you a little background info , im 16 years old and i have been working on this track on and off for a couple of weeks ive been trying to make some harder club tracks hardcore etc , this is my first attempt i already have a list of things to do but i just wanted to show you to see if its worth it.

Things to do

1.Sort out all levels
2.Add more perc
3.Make the bassline less dirty when melody etc all going
4.Master it

i would really appreciate any feedback on this



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Ben Agg

Things to do:

1. Make that kick DIRTIER or just lower the tempo
2. Be more inventive on that snare roll
3. Make the bassline either dirtier, or leave it thies way and... lower the tempo.
4. Add more sound effects please
5. Try to make up your mind of making either Hard Trance or Hardcore, for christ sake
6. Leave that melody IN, I love it!
7. The Hihats need more FX
8. Be carefull of what you're producing, you have to make up your mind of which audience you're trying to reach!

Still too cheesy now, I hope it grows to something more impressive in the future!

-weBs

thx for the reply ill take that into account but im thinkin of not bothering , i got a few sample sounds from a friend etc and he didnt do anything to the track , but now everbody i know says ive just stole his track so i just think wtf??? i just mite not bother...

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Ben Agg

basically what websley said... it just sounds too HOLLOW to me, and yeah its too cheesy for me... but hey that's your style! and don't sweat it i'm 16 years old also

rj / space pirate

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