The 1st thing I would change is the name. Think its a bit in bad taste.

As for the tune....

You can tell its not your 1st, there's some alright structure there
although it does feel that everything progresses a bit quickly.

Wasnt keen on the "euro trance" sounds used, felt you could have dug a bit deeper into your sound banks to find some really good bits and peices.
Thought the main synth was quite nice though.

Hope that was a little help

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Ash

I don't think the name needs to be changed. Hurricanes, Typhoons, Earthquakes, Volcanoes and the like have all destroyed things and taken life, yet there are countless songs, movies, theme park rides, etc named after them.

Anyways, the track, I don't really know what to critique. It sounds like you know what you're going for but you havent quite matured enough in your production skills yet. I'd suggest leaving this track alone, learning from it, and starting fresh.

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