Sounds pretty good, nice sound-effects and synths you used. The drums only lack a hihat release-sound that usually sits between the kicks:
1 = kick
2 = hihat release

1 - 1 - 1 - 1
- 2 - 2 - 2 -

However everything is nicely mixed, it misses layers. Maybe a simple fill in, another soft sequence melody or a low note? I can't tell, but think about it anyway. You could also give it a more interesting clap? - I find it rather dry ATM.

I can't help saying that there's little I find interesting about the melody, but that's just taste I think. I know dozens of people who would find such melodies pretty agreable