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Well...not a bad job for a first production, but you have to learn a lot.
- Snare is to loud
- That first synth is way to thin and is not playing a nice melody
- Your bassline is ok aswell as your FX are
- THe structure of the track is not very logic, there is no real build up.
- All your synths are very thin, very subtractorish and malstromish  .
- Nothing happening in the intro so far...doesnt get my attention really
- Very strange structure, you actually have no real climax and final melody...you have no chord changes at all...which makes it very boring.
keep on producing. I guess this is one of your first tracks. I dunno what type of track you want to produce? Trance? I think you have some original structure things but you really have to improve on your sounds and melodies and all, it isnt variating and it doesnt get my attention at all.
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