Hey Eric


Nice sound you have going here - sounds very pro indeed. I like the synths you used a lot, especially in the buildup. The only suggestion I would have is to increase the bass volume a bit more, but some may like it quiet.

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very nice track but theres not enough of atmo, just play with delays and reverb

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Lost In Trance...

nice track so far, i'm 2 mins in, and that interesting synth has just made its way in.

I'd have to agree with what Ricky said, in that the bass needs bringing into the mix more.. it seems to be sitting in the corner by itself..

3 mins in, and the track is feeling a bit empty still.. but this maybe because of the quiet bass

3.30 - nice selection of leads in here, no comments about them

4.20 - into the break, the samples you've used for the percs here sound a little lo-fi. is this by design?

interesting idea with the kicks for the fill, however, its jumped back into the song, and it still feels a bit empty. bring that bass right into it

FX and snare fills are good, but the percs are a little empty. could be because of the reverb on them.

Its sending my sub mad, but it still sounds like theres no upper bass in there to pad out the sound.

Steve

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Faithless - Insomnia (Steve's Sleepless Nights Remix)

this is getting better and better

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ok . I 'm gonna take your advice and work on it some more .

see you soon with another update .

thx guys !!

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Aweomse work from a fellow dallas-ian!
Keep it up!

Constructive:

I like the way the bass comes in at the beginning, although maybe too quiet or too low cutoff

More reverb and panning on the the melodies! (try this): make an identical synth line to the melody you already have and pan it all the way left, then pan this current one all the way right, then put panned delay on each

Louder pads during and after the buildup! The more things you add into a track, the more you can drop out for effect, and the more things you have to drop out, the more things you have to add for effect!

(by drop out i mean stop playing for x amount of bars and by the second add i mean bring back in)

very cool remix!