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State of Matter
Mashed Potatoes

Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Maryland, USA

Shadowdance - Fluorescent Moon

Was inspired so I wrote this track today. Simple and beautiful, hope you enjoy.

Shadowdance - Fluorescent Moon

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Last edited by State of Matter on Jan-10-2005 at 02:12

Jan-10-2005 02:03 United States

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TranceFantasy2k
Junior tranceaddict

Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Connecticut, USA

sounds good. love the strings and the piano. All around i love you tracks, especially scarlet oak. Just wish you could have made this one a little bit longer but it's damn good for being made in a day.

Jan-10-2005 03:34 United States

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tylerc
wannabe ballaz

Registered: Nov 2004
Location: MN USA

Beautiful stuff man. Great melody, great sounds. I love the deep bassy saw pad. Definitely like the chimes when it kicks in.

I guess the only thing I can gripe about is the long kick roll. I think I'm just getting sick of rolls in general tho.

Keep it up kid.

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chris_spence
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Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Newcastle upon Tyne

This is excellent stuff man! Sounds a bit like 'Radiance' but that was mint too:up: Get this finished

Chris

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Jan-10-2005 09:44 United Kingdom

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TOR
Traveller

Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Bruges, Belgium

you're the king of strings, mate.. theses are huge again. gorgeous melody too.

i'm well impressed

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Jan-10-2005 09:49 Europe

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Mane
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Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Poland, Szczecin

very well produced track melodie is ok, nice string and bacground overall very good track but you can make lots better tracks

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Jan-10-2005 16:45 Poland

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EtherealSL
experiments underway

Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Washington D.C.

quote:
Originally posted by TranceFantasy2k
All around i love you tracks, especially scarlet oak.

anyways, nice track, glad you filled those strings out, now this sounds a lot fuller and thicker. can't wait for that rework of "sapphire (storm)"

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Jan-10-2005 17:01 United States

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State of Matter
Mashed Potatoes

Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Maryland, USA

Thanks a lot guys, really appreciate the feedback. Will stick this one on my demo, let's hope for the best.

TranceFantasy2k: The song itself is 8:54, this is just a sample

Jan-10-2005 17:49 United States

State of Matter
Mashed Potatoes

Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Maryland, USA

Anybody else? Where is everybody...

Jan-11-2005 17:57 United States

Subtle
Subreme tranceaddict

Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Urban Shakedown

great quality.. good atmosphere.. nothing really to point the finger on.. u will probably get this released if u finish it good work

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Jan-11-2005 18:03 Norway

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DJ-Kreing^^
Syncope

Registered: Jul 2001
Location: rothland

Nice work man!
The sound quality is really good, sounds really professional. Love your synth work… melody is quite nice, nice chord progression.
The break has a nice dreamy feel to it, love the pianos…

1:02 – its just sound wrong here, seems like the way you arranged the notes of the lead synth which kicks in at that point doesn’t go well with the piano notes. I dont know maybe its just me, but check it out.

Over all, this is a great solid production, well done.

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Last edited by DJ-Kreing^^ on Jan-11-2005 at 18:52

Jan-11-2005 18:37 Israel

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eulerfx
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Boulder, USA

- use different synth for strings, make them fuller and more realistic, or more Airwave sounding.
- pianos are very nice, but make them louder and fuller as well
- good atmosphere in the song, don't see this kind of feel much these days
- clean up the hats, they seem too muddy]
- add more snare

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Jan-11-2005 18:48 United States