Ok after i relised the castle in the sky remix sucked,i would of improved upon it but i got bored of the tune (cause its cheesey) so i decided to produce my own tune, i dunno what sort of trance youd call it but dont forget its my first production so i need some comments on what to do with it as it need some work yet and id like some oppinions

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kick is week :-( sorry too say, but i actually sucks on my monitors. its not powerfull, or punchy or anything.
around 1:30 the pad takes over, and all the oder sounds are drowning :-( too muddy

im sorry too say, but this is not good (hope your not affended) but it really need work this track, actually i would start a new track, maybe trying to create something/sounds/pads etc you heard in other track, and go from there. work on everything, and keep up!! you learn by doing :-)

keep it up

Daniel

ok i dont really like start new tracks cause i can never concentrate long enough on it
but i'll try and also try to improve on this POS tune