Great Track. Nice improvement from the last version. If I am not mistaken, you have added another synth layer at some points, and adjusted the kick.

Good work on the second version, although I thought the first was awesome! Nice improvement though.

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Greg Eklipse

first of all i must say i do not like the original track very much

plus
great pads in the beginning
really like the way the bass changes in 1:48
break introducing the main lead is very good

minus
not fan of the lead on top
dont like the snare roll
lose the snare roll

conclusion
good beginning.. the percs sounds very generic
, and the snare drowns.. and the snare used for the snare-fills sounds awful.. I enjoy the bass.. the main lead is cool, more layers in the percussions and maybe in the synths would do wonders.. this sound very FL-ish.. am i right?

good attempt, feels a little "empty"

7-/10

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X-Trance @ SoundClick.Com

Hey Mantrance

Liked your first version, and this is cool too. Love the pads in the buildup at the start, and the bass is cool too. Not sure about some of the percs, maybe the hi-hat, but your synths are top notch.

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downloading....

I dont know the original so i can jugde on that, lets have a listen.

Starts out with nice pads, but they sound very cutt of, i thought the filter would go open a bit more. KIck is very weak, aswell is the percussion. Bassline is decent. The big synths are clashing at some points, i can haer a bit of clipping sometimes. Track sounds very empty, almost no precussion layers or background sounds. Your synths are very generec, just some simple saws. This probably Fruityloops work?

I like the part around 2 minutes. Break now, the pads again, your equalizing is not top notch, you need more high end clarity. That snare is awfull. Breakpart is nice. You lack any kind of clear FX in this track, or panning background bleeps and synths.

I think this is a decent production, you got all the basics covered but you need to work a bit more on your percussion and synthwork, which is very basic.

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