Heres a sample of my latest work in progress:

Bren-F - Beyond The Clouds (V1 Sample) 112kbps

A few people have said that my last track 'Open Air' was a bit on the happy side
So I have decided to go fore something more on the depressing side for my latest venture

I'm aware that the percussion is a little thin at the moment and the track is in need of background niceties/fx ect to make it a little more interesting, but this is something I will fix later on as it is still early days

Any other thoughts/suggestions/critique are welcomed...
Let me know what you think !

Cheers


PS - Fundy, don't worry mate. I haven't forgotton our track - I'll try to get it sent across to ya tomorrow buddy. Don't worry, it's only 6 months since we started it.....

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- I like the fast hi-hats, maybe make them louder.
- Those synth stabs may have a little too much reeverb on them
- Choirs are good, but play with the LFO controls, so that the sound changes, at least in the beginning
- Guitar needs to be a bit more prominent.
- Bass souns pretty good, though I would cut it even lower.

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Very simple, emotional, and cleanly produced. Top track.

Less and less people seem to be reviewing anything these days. Shame, this is great stuff.

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great track, i'm liking this a lot more than that happier tune

but i wouldn't call this depressing either. The bass, imo, actually sounds fine where it's at, that dirtiness of it gives the track a nice unique sound.

melody is nice and mellow, not too catchy, which isn't necessarily a bad thing because it's not some epic anthem. i wish you introduced your lead in the breakdown, as the breakdown doesn't offer much besides pads filtering in.

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great percusion (even if its only earlie stage ), bassline is ok but maybe has a bit too many freq?? verygood pads, i like this a bit dark atmosphere , great melodie i like the sound you use for it (you use vsts??) overall very solid track , keep it up

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>beautiful choirs/strings
>beautiful instruments
>nice beat
>cleanly produced : +1

8,5/10 for the moment

wanna hear this finished !

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Absolutely wonderful. If you're looking for remixers, I'd love to have a stab at this beauty.

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this acid(?) sound at the start is nice
bassline is cool!

the clap is good but i think you should make him stronger

the choir & the strings are great!

it sounds like almost everything is a little bit too much panned right, but maybe its just me?

anyway really cool track!
good job!

I don't like the bassline nor the sound of it. The pads are great though Nice and chill tune.

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definitely a melody i like more than Open Air

lovely choirs, though i feel they conflict with the pads a bit. they need to be more seperated from each other and should cover more stereo space.

there are a few other issues too, but since this is only a sample, i'm sure you'll sort it out for the final version.

lots of potential in this one.

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hey, bren!

again some great work from you!
bassline could use a lil less cutoff, imo! would sound a bit deeper...
choir is fine! great melody of pads!
some nice plucked chors as well!
kick is kewl btw!
percs have a basic structure but sound great...

hopefully we hear the full version soon!

Usual high standard of production, very clean. Personally I prefer the happy stuff but this is ok. Looking forward to hearing the finished piece.

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