the kick is too loud in my opinion... and a little bit to punchy... i like the strings ... what do you use to get those nice string sounds? @ 1:23 i like the little melody that starts then goes up one octave... are u gonna turn this into a more 'eletronic' type of music, or you just did this for the hell of it...
-The kick was overly pumped just because im retarted and loved how it sounded on my monitors even though it was way too loud on my home stereo... I can always fix that though, you dont like the rhythm of the kick on the 2nd half?!
To R.j: I used Edirol Orchestral and a few vienna string samples with a good amount of EQ and compression..
-I did this piece just for the hell of it, and I dono if it would make such a great electronic piece.. I think this simple composition is what gives it such a dramatic feel.