a new collaboration tune i did with a friend of mine

comments crits and opinions?





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Last edited by Nrg2Nfinit on Apr-28-2005 at 06:43

This aint for me bro...sry

but in my opinion i think the percussion is weak and the synth sounds u choose to work together...dont

but ur transitions skills r good...everything did flow...even tho sounds were not something i prefer

keep trying...if u wanna get me hooked

Sebasano

I thought it was pretty dope, except the piano seemed out of place..
wicked work though, producing is one of the toughest things for sure

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yeah i think maybe the piano might congest things a little.. it makes the track a bit too airy?

maybe ill try a different instrument or something.


thanks for the feeback

The piano is out of key and the whole tune seems to be abit simple and monotonic.
Take the time to learn the rules of harmony and chord progressions.

Keep on working tough, its all a matter of practice.

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Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^ The piano is out of key and the whole tune seems to be abit simple and monotonic. Take the time to learn the rules of harmony and chord progressions. Keep on working tough, its all a matter of practice.

Ill see what i can do.

i think the piano is mucking things up a bit.. and thats afecting the harmony

thanks for the advice

ya man...keep it up

Sebasano