Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
Your structure is too short. You could spend a lot more time developing the gradual motion of the track instead of just starting with percs then coming in with the melody.
The breaks section is nice, but the high end drums are barely there.
In general, you have a lot of EQing to do. The structure is more a matter of opinion than anything else, though, so feel free to ignore this stickler on that point.
Feb-08-2005 00:37
Axolotyl
hired goon
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
The track has a nice flow and feel and lots of energy to it. A tad formulaic at the start, but I quite like the melody that kick in at 1.50... it hits some pretty sweet notes =) The mix sounds a bit muddy, but I'm not much of an expert on that stuff, so I can't comment in depth. Also, very short for a trance track!! Only 3.30 min...
