Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Sacramanto, California
1:28-31 is a bit sloppy.
I really like the synths right after though. Drums are a unique addition to this song.
About 5:00-5:30 sounds a tad off tempo.
Overall, nice work!!
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Feb-12-2005 18:19
gerrycueto
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Registered: Aug 2004
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i like the kick, but i don't like the high hats... maybe you can use a hatloop instead... some of the synths and stuff are off beat.. and I dont' really care for the clap being on the 1st and 3rd beat of each bar... it would sound better on the 2nd and 4th beat.
listening.. starts up with a pretty hard kick, waiting for the bass to complement it.. nice synth fx in the beginning.. a little too much low end on those lead sounds in about 1:10, ooohhh... i can hear the Vanguard thomping the awesome riff.. hehe i think u should build up the track more before u start with the main lead.. i can hear u did a mistake here.. the snap is off or something.. making it totally off-beat.. didnt u notice? (too much in a hurry maybe) try using a little more time.. to improve the track.. its not bad.. but when things are offbeat.. that is not good.. work some more mate
Faithless - Insomnia (Project 7 Remix)
i think u should build up the track more before u start with the main lead.. i can hear u did a mistake here.. the snap is off or something.. making it totally off-beat.. didnt u notice? (too much in a hurry maybe) try using a little more time.. to improve the track.. its not bad.. but when things are offbeat.. that is not good.. work some more mate
