indeed,the track is very darky,i like the atmosphere,reminds me an apocaliptic sci fi movie,the bass line is good but i dont like the sound of the bass itself,the percusions are well done,i dont liked some instruments but i definitively liked the track and overall have very good quality d( -_- )b

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very dark, "ill" sounds. i like the use if distortion. but i always think in psy ang goa, why do they always use these shitty kindergarten bassdrums, no power behind that! if you'd compensate that with a fat ass bassline....but naah. well, ok, enough bitchin well i think that's just not my style.

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LOL...man,this is extremely dark,not my type of genre at all but mastering it's very good and those synths are nice.
Kopi =o.

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@ coldheaven:

hey dont be hatin the kick , try this tune: Astral Projection - Ionized. It exploits this kind of kick to the max.

@ trak:
- this track has some energy and punch in it
- overall, needs a more prominent 4/4 hat to set it going, else it seems like a build up the whole time
- nice sfx in the bacgkround, maybe add like a car drive by sound and pan it
- it seems to be a bit repetitive, even tho its short. personally, i wasnt bored, but in retrospect....

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Originally posted by eulerfx @ coldheaven: hey dont be hatin the kick , try this tune: Astral Projection - Ionized. It exploits this kind of kick to the max.

don't get me wrong, for example my favorite goa track: "the delta - as a child i could walk on the ceiling". same kick, but with powerrrrr!! beautiful sub frequencies, though it is such a "high-pitched" goa/psy bassdrum. i just need a whole bassdrum, not just a lush kick like in that track, sorry m8! just my 2 cents!

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woo, i like it
i think there are some things that needs looking at, this track could be so awesome. Id say build it up more, make it more intense, slowly fade up some reverb on that arp acidy line that kicks in at 1:59 as the song goes by, maybe whack some distorted piano over the top a minute later playing some disturbing themes, fade in noise, distortion, more effects, moremoremoremoroem!
keep working on it for sure :P