Hey,
Listening .. mmm the kick clicks a bit though, interesting BMP and me likey the beat .I like lead you are using but I would add more effects to it :P but that's just me.Gotta love at 3:00 when the synth gets all funky,me likey alot.
In overall, I like it, it's good to listen slow and diferent Trance tunes, the mastering sounds pretty good to me but I am using my shitty job speakers so I cannot really judge your mastering,great work mate keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Ok, let's see.

1) Really liking the drum pattern..
2) Also like the way you introduce the two new sounds in a staccato fashion.

3) Perhaps it might be cool if you introduce some variations in the length of the notes at around 1minute mark (maybe make some of them longer)

4) I think a female vocal sound would be great for the main melody instead of a synth, accompanied by some lush pad.

Solid work!

Hey thanks for the possitive feedback guys, really appreciate it. I would love to add vocals to tracks of mine but I want a really good vocalist who can go wild and experiment on top of my tracks(while stayin on key). I think that would be pretty cool, but its hard to find right now when im so busy with school.

Ok I like the percs, not too keen on the kick drum itself but you have made it work with the track quite well. This whole track is very different, but I like! Its good that you are being unique.

Can I reccommend some overall top end boost, just to give it an extra bit of sparkle. Other than that, the dynamics seem fine.

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Thanks for the feedback pete, glad you liked the track and any recomendations are definately helpfull