Hai ppl!

I´m a 23 years old Trancer from Germany and this is my first real try to make music. Now I have uploaded a little preview of my track i´m workin on. It´s only a cuted preview, without hats claps and effects. I just want to hear your opinion.

You can download the preview [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
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So tell me plz what you think of.

Lg.

It's a very classic tune, not a bad attempt. But there's a hell of a lot missing. I'd like to hear what is sounds like with other percussion in there.

You might also want to consider composing a lead melody. Whats there at the moment works best as a background pad, not a lead.

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