kick-perc play in the beginning is cool...
i like that kinda female-ahhh-whoosh-fx...
bass fits very well..
nice background fx...
also the acid-line is well done..
plucked sound is in combination with this higher one is great..melody is amazing...
nice track- flowing with great sounding bass/kick the vox are alright not too distracting from the flow, doesnt have much of a main melody as of yet- but i can see the progression and its tight...
thanks for the preview, any chance of getting full? I'm a dj out here in canada...
Feb-10-2005 00:04
Axolotyl
hired goon
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: atoms are not things they are possibilities
Listening now...
Nice intro. Great sounding sweeps
Vocal at 1.15... noiiice...
The lead at 1.25 sounds great. Good delay, (or something?) on it. It sits at the top of the track very well and the melody is perfect.
The guitar lead sound at 3.03 seems a bit odd. Not too sure why. I think it could do with being a bit clearer or higher frequency?? Just needs some tweaking to fit into the track better.
Anyway, I love this, cant wait to hear the finished number.
Your rmx of blueberry was excellent too...
Feb-10-2005 01:33
sooper
Beat Slut
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Toronto
Hey Pavel,
Top quality tune.
I love that 'exhale' sample.
I think the main lead sounds a bit thin though. All the other synths and sounds in your song are so tasty & textured, that the main lead feels weak in comparison.
Great job creating drive & forward momentum! Looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor
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- i like the uplifting and energetic nature of the track from the beginning
- the structure gets a bit boring
- the lead melody is alright, though nothing too special. i'd say work on selecting better notes
- add some more fx througout the track to make it more interesting
'Action Level - Bitter Tears [Original Mix]'
... thanx alot!
