The idea is ok, but it doesn't do what it has to do. (het knalt niet, what's the englisch word for this?!)

The sounds are very thin.
Try to eq much more, so you will get more layer. Alse compression is important to get it sound full.

The percussion is a bit thin too, the best way to solve this is to get more.

Here's a nice tutorial by Mr.Mystery:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...ight=percussion

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I agree that your sounds are a bit then but at the other hand that doesnt always have to be a bad thing. Your eq is very good at the moment, all sounds are well placed in the mix and especially that choir is very nice. I like your percussion and bassline, the atmosphere as been build out pretty well!. Your main synth is a bit generic and i think you should work on the main synth and the fullness of your sounds, especially that other string pad that you have behind the choir, that one sounds as a albino preset or something. Climax is ok but you could use more FX and filtering.

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thanks for the comments guys
@stino:

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that one sounds as a albino preset or something

it's all reason

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i like your stuff alot, please keep them up !

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Hi Renco! The used instruments are good, synth the much beautiful one, continue the plan!

thanks for the comment guys, here is the second sample.. dunno when i finish it

Download here : Kamaya Painters - Endless Wave (Stone Fusion Remix Sample)

cheers
renco

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I like the *glittering* sounds and the climax is good!
Please try and remake the crash, it's a bit *reverby*

Keep it up !


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http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=248645

hey Renco.

Mastering can be a tiny bit better.

Bass is offbeat but i do think it fits, the pad is really nice, floats well.

no actually break here, just a fade out and then the melody comes in(of cource the melody is sweet ).

Climax didn't sound well in my ears, don't know something didn't match in my head.

maybe more drive, unless this what you intended.

Thats all

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