well, since i am the first and may be the last person who will give a review on this one, i must admit it sounds like shit
no bassline whatsoever, no melody or any kind
spectrum is fucked up, dynamics are fucked up
no reverbs, panning or some sort of unique aproach
sounds like techno? yes
done in fruity loops? maybe

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Originally posted by MegaMan well, since i am the first and may be the last person who will give a review on this one, i must admit it sounds like shit no bassline whatsoever, no melody or any kind spectrum is fucked up, dynamics are fucked up no reverbs, panning or some sort of unique aproach sounds like techno? yes done in fruity loops? maybe

be nice AND NO BASHING ON FLP!! i don't think i'll ever understand why people think of that program as soon as they hear something very noob. yea i made music that sounded like this song when i first started with flp and i think i've progressed (see sig). Many pro's use it as well, so stop playing it down, please.

quitproquo, this song lacks structure... and megaman DID bring up quite a few good points, no structure, ridiculously short sample, kicks are sporadic, completely lack of bass, we need more melody, something we can groove to

hope this helps, don't be discouraged, if you heard some of my first songs, you would be laughing for days

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Oops i produce dubstep now.

NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

Agreed, you need to work on it a bit, and it gets pretty repetive, but that asshole two posts up is WAY out of line. personally i kinda like the song. these people just havnt heard of OTHER FUCKING GENRES. It runs along the lines of IDM to me. not much techno showing here for me. but pretty damn harsh critique if you ask me. dont let shit like that put you down. just put some more work into the song, and what ever you do dont let anything like that ever stop you from producing. it should only make you stronger. there is evidence here, that you could make something pretty fuck good. show people like that, that you can do anything. keep up the work.

thnx for feedback. I know that the track isn´t very good - i made it in two hours.
it´s ok, that people don´t like this. the critics I get I take for doing better the next time.
It´s better for me to get bad feedback than no feedback.

PS: the track isn´t produced by fruity ;-)

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