getting it now,
ever thought of making your mp3.com page less complex and intense, just a thought.

Critisism time, I'm only doing this to help you:
1. Your bass is way too high
2. Your main synth is not loud enough, mainly hidden by the high volume, high bass.
3. It still doesn't sound professional, to be honest it does sound a lot like Out Of The Blue though
4. You have made this track slightly too loud

Good points:
1. It is a very interesting tune, still amateurish but still has that epic feel to it
2. It has a lot of Out Of The Blue filler samples and influences which can be well detected in your music.
3. You could keep the bass around the same volume at about 00:45 and add a lower bass tone to add furthur depth to the music.

Overall I like the piece, but take my points into hand, have another go at remixing it and there should be a real nice tune there. Also make a direct download of 160-192kpbs Mp3 as 128kpbs is shit.

And please tone down your Mp3.com page, it can give you a headache, a nice simple artist picture and sing images are enough.

Thx for the honest comments my friend! I'll keep them in mind when I make new tracks.
This one's a slightly older tune than most of the others I have on the page, but yet it still has some potential I think

However I can't upload 160 kbps versions, as mp3.com doesn't allow them... They only accept 128 encoded songs. I do have the 160 kbps versions on my pc, but I don't know where to upload them, so that I can link them to everyone.

Most of the loudness problems have been sorted out for my latest tracks, I used to have problems with it when I started to make songs.

Take care and see you later!

Lightworks

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just put them in spaceports in higher quality, and please tone down the mp3.com page

Ok I will

cya!

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