As some of you know i started doing production in august of last year.... And this is my latest offering i need to do more sound design to fill up the tune but this is 2min worth... Im using vocal samples from a dfuse tune, which the name escapes me atm....
be as harsh as you want just dont be a dick about it lol....
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Feb-21-2005 00:00
Highmay
of the Flying Highmays
Registered: Sep 2002
Location: Studio Cinecitta
the hell happened to MY song??
Feb-21-2005 00:10
fr0st
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: Brooklyn NY
quote:
Originally posted by Highmay
the hell happened to MY song??
well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter shit as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself.
Me smash highshit....
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Feb-21-2005 00:15
AstralNrg
JAYOZA
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: New York City, USA
use a better kick sample it sounds so muddy here, work on adding more percussion and effects maybe add a pad or some atmospheric stuff, its too minimal right now. The structure of the hihats are sloppy for some reason it sounds wrong. Otherwise good work, keep working at it. I like the vocals , is there any cahnce u can send it to me ?
peace,
Jay
Feb-21-2005 00:18
Mike Vicious
HIM
Registered: Aug 2004
Location: insomnia [dc]
Thats decent, good job
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Feb-21-2005 02:59
beema
too deep
Registered: Jul 2002
Location: NoVAMansLand
it's ok, not really my kind of music
I need a longer sample to judge
Originally posted by fr0st
well i got a new synth... And my lyric writing skills are utter shit as is all my english ability...... And i got inspired to do this instead... Sorry highmay you will have to live with just pictures from a silly cromagnon man such as myself.
Me smash highshit....
pathetic...guess you just dont have heart...
Feb-21-2005 04:06
Yan
fauxhawk
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Wano
Unfortunately, I don't know TOO many technical terms so my advice can help to an extent.
Vocals are great. The drumbeat that comes in around the :30 mark sounds great during the vocal part and during the short intervals between the vocals... but when there is a prolonged time between the vocals, such as at 1:30, it gets a bit annoying.
Otherwise, it's definitely a great start for a potentially awesome tune.
Feb-21-2005 04:07
vtec junkie
slave to the dark beat
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: In the zone, chief
quote:
Originally posted by beema
I need a longer sample to judge
ditto
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Feb-21-2005 04:08
TiTi
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: New York
Only thing I can say is, it's too repetitive. Don't know how else to put it.
Feb-21-2005 15:47
Highmay
of the Flying Highmays
Registered: Sep 2002
Location: Studio Cinecitta
its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions...
Feb-21-2005 16:29
DJ_Lord
Bittersweet Symphony
Registered: Mar 2002
Location: Bella Vista
quote:
Originally posted by Highmay
its nice, but liven it up a little bit...have some chick in the background orgasming...that'll get peoples' attentions...
