Can be download here, if it doesn't work, try copy & paste into your address bar.

A track that I'v been working on for two weeks already.

Sample Quality : 192
Name : The Dutch Girl
Length : 6:32 Min.
Author: Paulo Der Munoz

Feedback is appreciated.

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Last edited by PDM on Mar-12-2005 at 16:32

Hiya

That high fx is a bit to loud i think.

nice Kick.

so far intro pretty empty mate, try to add more perc and different fx sounds.

That synth is just to soft on it's own.

Weird gated pad or something is cool.

1.36 very cool how it jumps to the acid part. It happens sudden and the transition is good, so thats a good thing.

no Actual lead in the intro/build nothing that really stands out, which is to bad.

Break, bring out those strings more infront, make them scream.

Climax wasn't that well, synth is to average and to soft, melody is medicore, but not bad tbh.

Look at your levels and EQ, try to bring the theme infront with the kick and bass, and the rest on the background. Also work on the arrangements a bit more. And take your synths wisley next time

thats it hehe.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Thanks for the comments. Massive84, gonna work on some of the points you made.

Anyone else?

C'mon, just one review?

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quote:

Originally posted by PDM Thanks for the comments. Massive84, gonna work on some of the points you made. Anyone else? C'mon, just one review?

ya fucking sad, i see you reviewing people, but no one that returns the favor.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Sure, not direct link tho, but you can download from there.

Thanks.



http://dermunoz.dmusic.com/

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Agree that the track could use some more elements in percussion and fx department, sounds bit incomplete now. Also that filtered synth at 3.39 needs some polishing. The gated synth at the end is too weak too.

The track has potential though, some good parts in it. Needs just more work

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