This is my newest i'm working on. It's a rough mix of 'Dawn of Time'. I think it sounds really nice, but i think it needs some work. Tell me what you think about it, and maybe you have some tips to make it better. Tomorrow i will work on it again, so any input now would be great. -Romi
I love the ambience
good breakdown
if I were making it, I'd make the part after the long breakdown have a little more energy, so the song kinda takes you somewhere farther than where you were in the beginning of the song.
keep up the good work!
Mar-10-2005 22:11
Romi
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thanks AudioGuru, i will use your input tomorrow, when i work on it further.
Mar-10-2005 23:22
1mason11
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Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Munich
fantastic break man.but i think the kick comes in too aprupt.i would make a raise before the kick comes in, so there is more power and climax in it.can become a top notch track i think.
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Mar-10-2005 23:51
Romi
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thanks 1mason11, i will keep that in mind. (i will pm you later about the mp3 for my other track Technological Mind). I'm glad you liked this one so far.
Mar-11-2005 00:00
pho mo
tropical bliss
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Darwin
Sounds really good, beautiful stuff really!
I found the noiseiness of the synths a little irritating, could just be my sensitive ears
Everything else is sweet, really nice ambience and mood. Good shit, sherlock!
Indeed, the noise in the lead synth is a bit irritating ( EQ?? ). Make it more predictable when the kick comes at break with a swoosh/sweep or drum roll. Nice work m8.
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Mar-11-2005 08:15
Romi
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Thanks for the tips guys. I'm gonna work on it later today and i will keep your suggestions in mind. The overall mix could indeed be a bit better. Thanks again
Mar-11-2005 08:35
Romi
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Rijswijk
Ok, i've worked on it some more and i am now quite happy with it. Tell me what you think. Same link btw.
Last edited by Romi on Mar-11-2005 at 15:13
Mar-11-2005 14:50
IDarkISwordI
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Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Clay Center, USA
Wow. Yes mate, keep producing tracks and check your email . Awesome tune and I mean tune not song if you know the difference :P.
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
You could use some more sound effects in the intro. Once 0:25 rolls around, you can leave them, but it would be nice to have some ambience there in the beginning.
Awesome bassline. Very groovy.
The kick fill before 4:00 is throwing me off. Dunno if that was intentional or not.
In general, a very chilled track. Good for some easy listening.
. Awesome tune and I mean tune not song if you know the difference :P.
