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Rayan
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo
Talking Ryan - Yahweh <-- listen & give some feeback.

hi.. This is my newest tune..
hope you like it...

give some comments of it..
I culd have made it better. But I have not been capable of doing more.

Here it is:
http://www.lydparken.com/download/g....asp?fileid=491


enjoy!!!

cheers.

Old Post Mar-10-2005 17:54  Norway
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Energy 87
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Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Hungary

This is very nice!

I like your piano melody.
All the melodies fits well to the track.
Very well produced.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers, Gabe


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Rayan
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Registered: Jan 2005
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thanks Energy 87

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AudioGuru
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver

Great track, I'd definently spin this one
pretty much nothing to complain about from me.
maybe leave some kinda percussion in the outro, for mixing sake. that might make it sound better while being mixed.

keep up the good work!

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seawinde
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Registered: Mar 2005
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Wow i like the tune , keep it up wish to hear more from u


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Axolotyl
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Registered: Feb 2005
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Hey,

Sound at 1.20 is beautiful, farkin epic stuff... What did you use to get that sound? I'm after something very similar for the track I'm working on.

The dry filtered digital elements in the background work very well. A very strong contrast and a case where something sounding digital works very well.

Dont really like the piano riff. I think it makes the track sound a bit cheesy, but thats just personal taste I guess.

The percs are a bit weak in imho. You could really beef up the kick and I think the clap/snare could be turned up a notch too.

Overall a very strong driving trancer with a fresh kind of sound to it. I really like it =)


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staticblue
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Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toulouse, France

hi mate,

pretty nice work.
i wasn't very impressed about the main synth chords, i think they are very very basic, and boring. it's the most basic chord sequence used thousands of times in dance tracks and to me those chords sound really cheesy.
the piano and other synths are very cute tho, and the bass is sounding good here !
you have some nice energy in the track, it still needs some mixing work tho.

peace
staticblue


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Rayan
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo

hi mate!!! How are yo?

Well I know... The chords are very typical.. But It was my way of making this tune.. a little Art-Fridom you know

The song is a very typical-cheesy song. And i know I got alot of mixing to do with this tune. but I dont ahve the time to realy finnish them. To bad

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Rayan
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo

Axolotyl: you where talking about an epic sound at the 01:20. did you meean the lead who I use the filter (cut-off) on? And the drums behind are "pauks"...

yea! the dry filtered digital sound are cool. used some time to make it though..

the thing with this song is that I wanted to add Vocals on it. girl vocal.. I think that would be nice.. I will do that later

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PDM
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Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA

The chords are typical but well implemented, the piano sounds are beautiful, a bit repetitive, but is forgivable since is not a 10 minutes song .

Good Job.


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Rayan
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Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Oslo

PDM: thanks for a great review
hehe.. the piano did I make on a accident. I did just play something. and the record was on :P

but it was cool!

Old Post Mar-12-2005 21:50  Norway
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Digital Aura
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Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
Drunk ...nice

I actually like the piano...its organic enough to take the edge of that harsh saw synth.

Great tune and well constructed!

Keep at it!


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