Bassline sounds dope. It is in a million other trance tracks though.
I really like the kick. Sounds really nice. Percussion is really sweet too. Maybe take some reverb off your clap, and bring it a little more toward the front of the mix.
Typical trance style melody, sounds good, but very typical.

Good quality stuff though man.

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Originally posted by moth Maybe take some reverb off your clap, and bring it a little more toward the front of the mix.

There's a clap in there? I'm amazed you can hear/make one out, because I sure can't.
Otherwise:
-The crash cymbal at the start is too loud, and has too much hi-end.
-The kick's too slappy, and quiet in comparison to the bassline.
-The kick just doesn't have any middle/middle-low frequency punch behind it. The mix is also missing alot of mid frequncies, making the hihats/tambourines sound loud and hissy.
=The lead is too far back in the mix. It needs a bit of tweaking to get it sounding tighter, as it sounds quiet loose. Bring it more forward and have it fuse with the hihats as the two are currenty quiet distant(in terms of both gain and the frequencies they occupy).

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Originally posted by Rob There's a clap in there? I'm amazed you can hear/make one out, because I sure can't. Otherwise: -The crash cymbal at the start is too loud, and has too much hi-end. -The kick's too slappy, and quiet in comparison to the bassline. -The kick just doesn't have any middle/middle-low frequency punch behind it. The mix is also missing alot of mid frequncies, making the hihats/tambourines sound loud and hissy. =The lead is too far back in the mix. It needs a bit of tweaking to get it sounding tighter, as it sounds quiet loose. Bring it more forward and have it fuse with the hihats as the two are currenty quiet distant(in terms of both gain and the frequencies they occupy).

thankn you for both replys..

i'll defaintly work on what you've said rob... thanks for that

I don't have the best monitoring equipment at the moment. But i have to say i like the kick, as well as the percussion. If anything i would simply add another couple hats eq'd more toward the middle freqs.

This track reeks of quality though. It's obvious you've got technical skill.

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Originally posted by moth I don't have the best monitoring equipment at the moment. But i have to say i like the kick, as well as the percussion. If anything i would simply add another couple hats eq'd more toward the middle freqs. This track reeks of quality though. It's obvious you've got technical skill.

woa! thanks man!

the whole thing was done in reason (including the kick)

out of the 107 who have viewd this thread, anyone else care to share some feedback

(please )

I like the kick, percussion is good but as stated before the hats are a little 'too high', need to drop back a bit.
Lead pads and that sound tight, but need to be more forefront in the mix also.
Coul develop into a epic uplifting trancer tho!!

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Originally posted by DJ Twenty I like the kick, percussion is good but as stated before the hats are a little 'too high', need to drop back a bit. Lead pads and that sound tight, but need to be more forefront in the mix also. Coul develop into a epic uplifting trancer tho!!

thanks bud, i've be working on bringin it forward into the mix. The track is eventualy going to be vocal uplifting trance.. vocals will prob come a little later

- acell

its starting out good mate heres what I noticed
1.Quality is deff real Low
2. Kick is to thumby for asot style needs to be tightend up morewith the bass
3. The Percs and Crashes were really on the High end
4. The track lacks Mids and some lows
5. Needs louder clap with some reverb
6. Its got a great feel going here dont stop.!!!

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Originally posted by DJ-Igloo its starting out good mate heres what I noticed 1.Quality is deff real Low 2. Kick is to thumby for asot style needs to be tightend up morewith the bass 3. The Percs and Crashes were really on the High end 4. The track lacks Mids and some lows 5. Needs louder clap with some reverb 6. Its got a great feel going here dont stop.!!!

thanks man.. the kick is kind'a out of control.. i'm working on it

i'll post more when i've got more to post