Hi there,

It was a while since i have posted my track here, so i decided to upload one of my latest FF* productions

I've loaded some MIDI's of A&B song, and played with some nice sounds. And [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
is result of my work.

Please listen & write a word about it

* FF - for fun

Cheers,
Damian

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No one?

Come on, 17 downloads and 0 comments?

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I'll comment...

Beginning, ok. Bass sounds good.

But then starts getting too noisy...Percs and hi-hats seem to be drowning out the music starting from 1:50. I think your Highs are too high.

Also seems to repeatative. There doesn't seem to be a build up.

And then at 3:12 - 3:25, I don't know what this is. Is it a build up to the main melody? Just kinda seems lost there.

Your drums just seem to come in all at once at the beginning. You should bring in the elements slowly so there's more of some tention, you want some mystery at the beginning to lure your audience into the song. And then the break should sound more unique than the beginning. It just seems to sound like 1 melody through out. Try adding different melodies with different instruments at different points for more depth.

Good attempt though.

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the percussion in the beginning could use some delay ffcts

around 0,48 i think the clap is a bit to loud & reverby

melody 's nice

break: rocks (y) excelent

strings could use a delay ffct

overall i like the track however i think it sounds a bit to hollow if you follow me...i would give some sounds some reverb/delay ffcts & gie it some more bass eq

keep up the work

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nice kick and perc.....bass excellent too !!

a bit heavy on that reverb, though headphones I had to turn it down so I couldn't enjoy it as much. left a ringing noise in my ears....so i may have to see my lawyer

this is my type of music.....really liked it

9/10

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Hi,

Thanks for comments I know - my build-up sucks

Anyone else to comment?

Cheers,
Damian

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some nice percs in the track. Like the others said, its a bit loud and noisy. Im a big big fan of the orginal and the gabriel and dresden mix and this 1 is totally different from those, thats what i like. The high synth naeeds some work imo. ITs a bit "normal". The overal is good but work on the noisy thing.

Keep it up

Im in love with Gabriel & Dresden Remix

My point was to make something diffrent, i'm glad you liked my attempt.

Cheers,
Damian

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by the way ... its not bad but keep the work up !
kick should be louder a bit ...
more low freq. on baseline etc

wana see it corrected

pozdro !

Sounds like african drumming at the beggining. I would love if some of the attacks were panned.

Higher drums and cymbals are mixed too high.

See what else you can do at 2:18 besides a steady bass line in the synth part. Just change 1 or 2 rhythms or notes and it will retain it's identity.

@ 3:00, are you sure you even want drums here?

@ 3:26 I think you want some sort of climax. The drums before do not allow growth. Maybe just work with 1 or 2 percusion instruments building up the intensity would provide greater contrast.

4:25 take at least an extra 10 secs fading out the melody. Add more reverb maybe?

Good stuff . Play around with your mix a little. Take a week off from hearing this track and come back. Funny how your own song's mix can sound completely different eith a fresh perspective

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