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six senses
Senior tranceaddict



Registered: Mar 2005
Location: netherlands
Trance track (full)

Hello fellow producers,

A few months ago i've finished a new trance track. Maybe you people could review it, because there are some things in the track which i'm not fully satisfied about. Maybe you could give me some tips on the track. Here's the link:

http://www.zwaluwengramsbergen.nl/s...ancetrack96.mp3

It's produced in Reason 2.5
Total time apr. 8.50 min.

Enjoy.

Greetz,
Six Senses


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Six Senses - Inner Thoughts Incl Peter Safranyos remix and Greenwave rework (Real Music)14/09/2005
Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

Old Post Apr-01-2005 13:31  Netherlands
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Jelle
tranceaddict in training



Registered: Dec 2004
Location: Beringen

I have no negative comments about this.

nice track!



suggestions: emphasize your breakdowns a little more, gives the listener more time to catch some breath and gives more contrast to your buildups.


keep it up!

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six senses
Senior tranceaddict



Registered: Mar 2005
Location: netherlands

quote:
Originally posted by Jelle
I have no negative comments about this.

nice track!



suggestions: emphasize your breakdowns a little more, gives the listener more time to catch some breath and gives more contrast to your buildups.


keep it up!


Thanx mate. And thanx for the tip.

More reviews?


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Six Senses - Inner Thoughts Incl Peter Safranyos remix and Greenwave rework (Real Music)14/09/2005
Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

Old Post Apr-01-2005 14:50  Netherlands
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Snowave
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Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Stockholm

yeah this is a nice track but agree then a little bit with sixsense and jelle do about breaks but it s neither wrong to have a pulsive track as this.

Could nt done a better by myself.

Peace §=o) Snowave

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Evolve140
Only Sidechaining a Bit



Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver

Aside from the obvious lack of sound quality (96kbps), I'd say you have a pretty solid foundation right from the start. I like that bass instrument and the rhythm it's producing. You might want to take it easy on the reverse symbols. At this point I'm enjoying the sound so much I wish it were full quality. At your first break down at around 2:20, I wish there was more of a melodic statement being pronounced right there, it comes in a little later. Your melody is excellent, but I'm defintely feeling an overload of those reverse symbols! At 3:44 it's defintely rocking my entire house, and a friend has just come in from the other room to hear. I like the break beats in your second break down, and I'm really glad you brought back that melody. I like the change in dynamics. 7:10, your outro is still strong, it's resonating with energy from the climax. Great presentation, my negative feedback is in regard to your use of reverse symbols, I think they're over used, I'm sure you can break it down another way. Also, the sound quality is kind of discouraging. 9/10, great job!

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six senses
Senior tranceaddict



Registered: Mar 2005
Location: netherlands

quote:
Originally posted by Evolve140
Aside from the obvious lack of sound quality (96kbps), I'd say you have a pretty solid foundation right from the start. I like that bass instrument and the rhythm it's producing. You might want to take it easy on the reverse symbols. At this point I'm enjoying the sound so much I wish it were full quality. At your first break down at around 2:20, I wish there was more of a melodic statement being pronounced right there, it comes in a little later. Your melody is excellent, but I'm defintely feeling an overload of those reverse symbols! At 3:44 it's defintely rocking my entire house, and a friend has just come in from the other room to hear. I like the break beats in your second break down, and I'm really glad you brought back that melody. I like the change in dynamics. 7:10, your outro is still strong, it's resonating with energy from the climax. Great presentation, my negative feedback is in regard to your use of reverse symbols, I think they're over used, I'm sure you can break it down another way. Also, the sound quality is kind of discouraging. 9/10, great job!


Thanks for the tips mate. I'm going to work on the track next week to fix some things. and then i will post a better quality. alright.

more reviews?


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Six Senses - Inner Thoughts Incl Peter Safranyos remix and Greenwave rework (Real Music)14/09/2005
Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

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adidas_pump
Junior tranceaddict



Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Argentina, Buenos Aires

I really like this track!
Nothing bad to say about it, everything looks quite alright, the structure is very tidy and clean...
keep up the EXCELLENT work

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RIPassion
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Registered: Dec 2003
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Wow, great reason work! I know how frustrating it can be to keep the malstrom lead sounding good at such high pitches, and you did a great job with that (is that even a malstrom lead or is it a sample? that sounds pretty good! I wish I could make that phat of a lead with reason )

Did you do any work on it outside of reason? Please check your PMs.

Last edited by RIPassion on Apr-03-2005 at 07:16

Old Post Apr-01-2005 23:43  United States
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music2dance2
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Jul 2001
Location: U.K.

This is good work mate defo need a better bit rate sample but i like the way it lifts through out. get this to some labels mate no question, unless you already have haha

Old Post Apr-02-2005 01:26  United Kingdom
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Jer
Never Left



Registered: Nov 2003
Location: London Town

I don't usually reply on these, but I felt the particular need to this time..

This is pretty solid. Pretty impressive sounds that you're getting out of Reason.

I like the melody, about the only thing I could possibly suggest is to give maybe *a bit* more time for buildup from the Intro.

Aside from that, VERY solid..

PM me if you haven't got a label on this yet.

~j

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six senses
Senior tranceaddict



Registered: Mar 2005
Location: netherlands

Thanx all! i haven't got a label for it yet. But i might going to send this to some labels. Any suggestions?


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http://www.sixsensesmusic.com
Six Senses - Inner Thoughts Incl Peter Safranyos remix and Greenwave rework (Real Music)14/09/2005
Six Senses presents Xposure - From the Heart incl Activa remix)(Conspiracy recordings)27/03/2006
Will Holland vs Six Senses - Frantic (Enhanced Recordings)
Sebastiaan Spang - E-minor incl YOMC remix) (Soup Recordings)
Zero2Sixx - Endless Emotions E.P (Symphonic Music Records)12/12/2005
Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss incl- Six Senses remix (Alter Ego records)20/12/2005

Old Post Apr-02-2005 07:13  Netherlands
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Mycron
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Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Budapest

quality track Sebastiaan, really good Reason work!

maybe add a few more fxes to some places, and it will be all good,

keep up the impressive work, mate

cheers,

Peter


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