Decided to post an older song of mine for review
constructive comments + criticism welcome.

here's the link
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down....cfm?ID=2401104

thanx for listening

oww yeh, "right click" + "save target as"
or maybe sign into soundclick heh

this song was made in FL 5.0, no outside influences, as with all my songs.

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Last edited by AniG on May-09-2005 at 00:55

im being neglected as usual T_T

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This is an awesome track, damn, how can this be ignored?

Extremely well designed lead sounds in my opinion, they sound just.. well.. awesome. I love this glassy sound in the beginning.
And then.. another great lead sound. Respect! The leads are very very dominant, not too dominant in my opinion, but I'd think about turning them down a slight bit.
I somehow dont like the breakdown at 3:30, its a kinda cheesy chord progression. Plus it really doesnt fit with the rest in my opinion.
But then at 6:00 you got that great main theme coming back, its really so damn awesome!
I say replace the cheesy 2nd theme and you got a little masterpiece. I cant get enough of that arpeggiolike lead (at 6:15 for example)!!

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thanks for your comment cybernetica
im glad you like the song.

anyone else like to comment?

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quote:

Originally posted by AniG or maybe sign into soundclick heh

bah!

EDIT: ok i bugmenot'd the k*nt. bwahaha. dloading now.

listening...

agree with cyber on the leads.

3:41 luvin that melody! cheesy, but it makes the feet want to move.
6:10 yeah, it's like two completely different tracks. lots of energy here. pumpin!

oh i don't like that beat... reminds me of system f - out of the blue.

man not sure how 'progressive' this is. definitely some uplifting elements there.

Bit disappointed i was expecting chinese instruments, dragon noises, or something

good stuff dude. keep at it

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Last edited by eRRaTiK on May-09-2005 at 02:11

Damn AniG, I hope you believe I keep playing this song over and over and over.
Great leads, great bass, solid kicks (in this part as a producer I envy you ), nice structure, I like it, that is it.

Congrats.

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thanx for all your comments everyone

just knowing that people like the song and my elements within the song brings a very big smile on my dial.

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anyone else wanna comment on the song?

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Nice track... some interesting elements

... too lazy to write anything else tho'

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howdy AniG,

Good selection of bass drum.

0.55 nice bass.

1.40 nice layering & progression....

3.46 the rythme morphs too quickly. Slow the freaquency changes & let it build up over a longer period time.

5.00 Im enjoying this rhythm.

There may be too much stoping & starting through this track. 2 major build ups are usually sufficient, maybe 3; but 4 just messes with the flow of the track.

Awesome elements in this track. Great rythmes, nice sounds with an energetic vibe.

Xeno.

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thank you for your comments

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Very awesome!
Like hearing it while driving my car!

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