- i like the strong, techy bass
- that synthwork in the break sounds really nice
- overall good track, but i suggest you add a lot more little, detailed things throughout. listen to tracks by Haak, like Bedlam for example and see what I'm talking about.

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thnx for the feedback. About the drums: They are mono dumb me..... There is more variation to come when i worked this one out.

Hey mate,

No idea if you have listened to the comment above but the kick now is way too loud It pounds through my speakers.

For the rest I like what I am hearing, very intresing percussional fx. The break itself is original but ouch again the kick really comes BLASTING in
The leadsound is intresting but a bit monotonous. I like the build up of the track more than what happens after the break. You could make it more melodic but maybe it was intended to be a bit more progressive.

Anyways, good effort.

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

I love this song. The rmake has some elements from Junkie XL's rendiiton of World on Fire (by sara mclauchlin - dont know how/why I heard it). I definitely want to hear the finished product, oh and the pan is great!

keep it going dude!

Very cool track. I like the lead very much, original and catchy. Maybe a bit more reverb on it should be better imo.

Nice synths etc, nice feel to it and some really good ideas

The kick sounds a bit thin and I think although the perc you've got is really good it could do with more in there. I also think the bassline needs to be louder.

All in all a good effort, just a few things to sort out to turn it into a really good tune

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thnx for all the usefull comments.

first of all i have to tell that im working on the reworked version and wht u can download is still under construction (Nomen Nescio : there are no changes made after i dropped this topic)

The track is in a early stage and im working real hard on this one. I keep u aLL UPDATED

hey Johan how are you doing?
very nice stuff mate, i like the these left-right synths.. kick sounds very strong bassline is missing some low freq. and the mastering isn't really good.. a little dump

cheers
Renco

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