Cool track. Turn up the vocals though. They drown in the mix. But I think everything will be better if you turn down the pads.. Heh, I will also try to remix this track in a short while. Vocals are nice.

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Cheers man. Only worked on it for a day so i'll probably revamp it after ive finished my other projects.

Looking forward to hearing you're version though dudey.

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

Hey JOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEey

My internet speeds are fucked up to fuck, so I couldn't stream all of this. from What I heard though it was pretty slick though, very nice beat and i did like the bass

Good stuff man.

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Piano in the intro sounds a little off. Then again, that may just be the way it's supposed to be.

Acid is really cool. More rappers need to start using that.

Yeh, the vocals need to go up a bit more in the intro.

I think you could make the synth stabs a little punchier and fat.

The vocals seem to be offbeat in the last chorus.

Not bad, from a musical point of view. Nothing really orginal going on, but fun to listen to, nonetheless.

if ur going to do rap, refrain from using any techno-ish sounds, I learned alot from my "rapper" friend....

i don't really like this 1...

instead of using that pad/watever ur using in the background, use Strings (real ones)

for the lil acid sound, use something else; don't really know exactly what they used in the original

the beat doesnt change *like in the original* when Eminem begins the chours--sounds weird like that....

the percussion sounds like house/trance percussion, no good...


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if u weren't going towards a more rap-ish remix then forget what I said....


i give it a 4.7/10

sounds alright

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quote:

Originally posted by R.j. if ur going to do rap, refrain from using any techno-ish sounds, I learned alot from my "rapper" friend.... i don't really like this 1... instead of using that pad/watever ur using in the background, use Strings (real ones) for the lil acid sound, use something else; don't really know exactly what they used in the original the beat doesnt change *like in the original* when Eminem begins the chours--sounds weird like that.... the percussion sounds like house/trance percussion, no good... ---------------------------------------------------------- if u weren't going towards a more rap-ish remix then forget what I said.... i give it a 4.7/10 sounds alright

In other words, a remix. Not similar to the original

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Originally posted by alexpea In other words, a remix. Not similar to the original

not exactly what i mean but ok.

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MGM 5 / MGM 4 /
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Electronic Dance Music Mixes:
EDM 7

Hey this is pretty hott keep it up bro.

NEED MASTERING dude-tracks bouncing would be good...Need RMS,and then....and then you would have awesome track.
Nice work...keep goin

Ah, as I said, I was only messing about. I will probably rework it sooner rather than later an then put it through harbal.

Appreciate the comments though guys.

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

wicked track man...i love it kuz its different.
cool acid to. good job

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