Anyone care to comment?

BB

Hey man!

Yup cheesey but that girl's voice is very cute. Can I have her number?

Well, it's very pro sounding, so you've got that going

keep it up!
Trevor

(Seriously though ... can I have her number? I'm horny)

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Hi Sooper,

Actually I sent her off to Toronto right away. She should be over at the airport right about now. Jut look for a gorgeous blonde with a sign "Take me Sooper".

Thanks for the comment: it IS ultra cheesy and that was the exact aim: to make a "top 40" main stream trance track. Hence the simple composition and straight forward sounds.

Nice of you to classify this as pro-sounding. Any areas you think I could improve(production wise)?

The style is not my personal favourite (yes, too cheesy). I tend to lean more toward crossover styles between techno and trance. Hopefuly I will be able to share some deeper and darker tracks on TA soon.

take care.

BB

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Originally posted by Beautiful Beast Actually I sent her off to Toronto right away. She should be over at the airport right about now. Jut look for a gorgeous blonde with a sign "Take me Sooper".

thanks for looking out for me!

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Originally posted by Beautiful Beast Nice of you to classify this as pro-sounding. Any areas you think I could improve(production wise)? The style is not my personal favourite (yes, too cheesy). I tend to lean more toward crossover styles between techno and trance. Hopefuly I will be able to share some deeper and darker tracks on TA soon. take care. BB

The tune was pretty solid, nothing really came to mind on things to improve upon. I look forward to hearing more of your stuff, especially some of the deeper & darker tunes

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thanks mate!

BB

hi i think at the start the sounds are very dry could do with a splash of reverb , and you could really bring out your kick and perc more , there really quiet and around 1.30 the melody fades out to fast imo , and you could splash alot of reverb on this track make it really dreamy , hmm just wondering if your intrested in a co production or let me have a rework at this? i actually think this track would be better without vocals they dont really fit and if i could have a play with this track i think i could come up with something quite cool , its your call mate

but nice production just certain areas need touching up

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This track rockS

I've pm you!

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www.mrmarcellos.com

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