This is my attempt at something slightly spooky and deep, tell me what u think.

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Interesting but I'm not sure you've got it quite dark enough. Would some diminished fifths help spook it up a bit ?

Andy

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Hey,
Listening .... Mmm, pretty dark, good job creating a Tension Athmosphere, Drums sounds fine, I like the shaker, has a very cool feeling. At 2:40, the breakdown, nice strings, kinda dont like me too much the filter u used, but that's just my very personal taste . I think you could added more power and energy after the kreadown, when the synth appears, lacks a bit of something.
In overall, is a good track, maybe too minimalist for me, good work .
Kopi =o.

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Nice intro and pads.
Don't really like the second synth build up, think it sounds too much for the style.

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listening :
kick is a little dump
nice bass, sounds deep.. i should add an extra bassline for the mid/high frequenties
perc is too empty, add some more hihats, shakers etc and make the clap stronger...
synth is nice, but a little computerish
melodies aren't really my style
and add some more fx/pads sounds
it's not to take you down, but i hope this will help you a little with your future productions!

-Renco

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