Also posted this in the Production Studio forum. sry 'bout that ;D

Anyways. I need feedback concerning mastering, EQ, sounds, and everything else you can think of, for this tune.

Vagabonds:

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(On the bottom of the page click the button free, and another page will load with a link on the bottom to the file)

Thanks

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Is your mp3 really called "...Edit_"? I get file not found

same here, file not found ...

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wicked...
URL is:
rapidshare.de/files/1624905/Vagabonds__Radio_Edit_.mp3.html

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Opening sound is promising, but the rhythm section is just too simple ... also there is little change in melody afterwards... very minimalistic to say the least... melody, hmmm , dunno , not my taste... sound choice is also too blurry i think . . . could be me

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I don't really like the bass sound - I think it should be a bit more punchy with a faster attack. As for the rest of the tune I like the sound - it grew on me more and more after listening a couple of times, but there's not quite enough going on... I think it would sound awesome with some vocals added

Tnx for the feedback. Good points.

About vocals. I really wnat the vocals from Pulsedriver's version of Vagabonds. The "we are old we are young we are in this together", anyone know how I could take the vocals out of that tune? there's a disturbing guitar-riff at the same time, and I don't wnat that, I just want the vocals

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