ppl, heeey

Hey Biochrome,

I'm digging your percussion set, tho, the snare sounds really cheap.
The Bassline is cool, really acid.
The melody starting at around 1:30, brings too much distortion into the picture, you should really fix that, I can dig the melody musically, but not technically.
Then another synth comes in the break (or so it seems to be the break).
You need to WORK MORE , LOT MORE IN THE MASTERING AREA.

There are some high frequencies disturbing my ears at around 4:00.

Musically, nice track, technically, sry mtae, it is still poor.

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Der Mystik's Music

thank you bro!

really it's one of my the first's tracks!
I making as solo producer not so long time...

We all start from scratch, dedication and patience is the key.
Check out the tutorials in the Production Studio board, they are very useful.
And learn one thing that I just did one year after I began producing seriously, NEVER listen to your productions with cheap headphones or the standard PC Speakers, if you can not afford to monitors, get some good monitoring headphones, like SENNHEISER 280 PRO.

Buy magazines like Future Music or Computer Music, they come with tones of info and samples as well.
And keep posting your new material and/or updates of already started tracks, we'll be glad to give you a hand.

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Der Mystik's Music

now I use Sony MDR-700DJ...

hah, I got one hour ago M-audio Audiophile 24/69 PCI card! =)
yeap, sound very bad... =( will work!
maybe in next month I'll get active monitors!

then we look, what I can to do! =)

thx for your support!

here edited version!

http://www.zone.ee/dlab040/pros/spo...t_ver_edit2.mp3