well it has a nice sound to it, but there is too much going on i think.
Sounds rather experimental the way the notes go up an octave, and that background noise (like swimming fishes or something) dominates the track (and distorts a little i think), u need to make it quieter or compress it.

btw what style is this suppose to be? it would fit quite well on a driving/racing game i think (like Need For Speed)

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Originally posted by mark_the_gooner well it has a nice sound to it, but there is too much going on i think. Sounds rather experimental the way the notes go up an octave, and that background noise (like swimming fishes or something) dominates the track (and distorts a little i think), u need to make it quieter or compress it. btw what style is this suppose to be? it would fit quite well on a driving/racing game i think (like Need For Speed)

Yea I went back and corrected the volume of that sound afterwards (space blips). The song still isnt done yet. I am not even sure what genre it is or what genre i can transform it into. I am going to be fading out some of the sounds and adding in 1 more melody and see if that brings it all together if not I will probably end up changing the main sound. Will work more on it this weekend and put in a an update.

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Hey,
Listening .... LOL, sorry, I cannot stop loling at ur nick/avatar/concept , OK, I will have to agree with mark, sounds like you tried to put too much things at once, and that's not bad at all, but they sound not like an all for the moment, and that FX that appears at 0.50 is very annoying imo, also all sounds sound too Plane/Flat, I would work a bit more adding FX to each sound so they sound more like a track, because right now they sound like if each one would be trying to make a solo or sort of, and make it sound a bit messed up imo. The idea is cool, you just need to work a bit more about the levels of each Layer and to give to each one their very own position into the track, plus some FX imo so the track sounds less flat .
Kopi =o.

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- track sounds pretty cool and techy at around 0:43
- add a 4x4 hat and snare in there somewhere to give it some force
- some things sounds a bit out of this world, too leftfield for me but definatly creates a different kind of sound overall

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Thanks guys I should have an update for this sometime this weekend.

I will def add the hats . I am going to remove the annoying sound but I do still think I need 1 more layer of melody somewhere.

Why does everyone keep laughing at my Hello Kitty

Im a girl! duh! girls have girly themes what can I say.

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Why does everyone keep laughing at my Hello Kitty Im a girl! duh! girls have girly themes what can I say.

So? I am a boy and I am not using a G-Joe Avatar , it's just that dunno, it's so pink!.
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Awsome tripped out Goa/Psy-trance sound going here. That little noise they keep talking about at .50 sounds AWSOME just make the noise blend in. Maybe stop the beat and have it blend in and drop the beat back in. I do not think I heard one break in the entire track which is pretty cool. I can tell that it needs work but for this track it is definatly something worth tweaking. Bring out the richer sounds and blend them together make the STereophonics work in your favor.

I think the ideas are pretty awesome so far. I would consider this goa/psy. Like everyone else said tho it needs tweaking on some levels and also a beefier bassline. I would also work on the stucture of the track. Keep it up, you are improving from your first track.

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hey z...


this is definitely an improvement from your first track that you posted...

some of your sound effects are freaking scary!!!
hahha... this shit would bug me out in a club...


definitely beef up the bassline a bit... and work on mixing the sounds a bit better... and try adding a break somewhere in there... some different percusion, also try do some panning for your effects...


hai lee



p.s. watch out for clipping.. i think i heard some here and there..

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Originally posted by trancinchink hey z... this is definitely an improvement from your first track that you posted... some of your sound effects are freaking scary!!! hahha... this shit would bug me out in a club... definitely beef up the bassline a bit... and work on mixing the sounds a bit better... and try adding a break somewhere in there... some different percusion, also try do some panning for your effects... hai lee p.s. watch out for clipping.. i think i heard some here and there..

Thanks babes I am really trying to become better at it. Lack of time and being a mommy is the real problem there so most times I cant get any silence until everyone in the house is asleep and I stay up all night working on a track and drinking pepsi

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yeah i defintely hear an improvment also good work .