This is on its way to being a pretty good remix. To me, it sort of sounds kind of like an Airwave production anyway, minus Airwave's signature huge kick drum (not saying yours is shit though )

production is a little bit on the muddy side, and I think some of the levels of the different parts need just a bit of evening out.

Arrangement is pretty good so far, but i don't want to say much about it, coz its a remix and thats up to you how you want to interpret the tune

i hope i didn't sound really harsh, i think this has good potential

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Originally posted by Invertika This is on its way to being a pretty good remix. To me, it sort of sounds kind of like an Airwave production anyway, minus Airwave's signature huge kick drum (not saying yours is shit though ) production is a little bit on the muddy side, and I think some of the levels of the different parts need just a bit of evening out. Arrangement is pretty good so far, but i don't want to say much about it, coz its a remix and thats up to you how you want to interpret the tune i hope i didn't sound really harsh, i think this has good potential

Not harsh at all I am still a newb so I need all the constructive critisism i can get. Thanks for the review honey

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Hey,
Listening .... The Synth in the Intro, sounds too mechanic/Sequenced, I would humanize it a bit cuze sounds too Preset though, those synths in the background are really cools, add a lot of support to the track. Bass, not bad, but u need to Master a bit ur kick, right now sounds like the bass is fighting with the Kick for the Low Range of Freqs. Another thing, are u using any kind of Presets? I mean for the sequences, sounds like Vanguard Gates/Arpegios, as I mentioned before .
In overall, is going pretty cool, u have good sound, I just would work a bit more the Mastering and instead to use presets I would do some my own arpgeios, good work .
Keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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i like the synths actually.. but the rhythm sounds a bit basic.. but its not completed now is it

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Thanks for the feedback guys, will def post and update tonight.

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Your beat is basic, a kick and a hat, your mixing isn't good.

First things first.

Try to practice beats .

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...22Percussion%22

here is something Nik made, really a good read for beginners.

mixing is just experience , after loooooots of time it will come from it self ( at least thats what happend to me )

But i recommend for now you practice to make a good beat with perc and bass, mix that good, keep practicing and then work your way to synths and such.

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