Registered: May 2005
Location: Nottinghamshire, UK
DarrenWilliams-Apart(OriginalDub)
Hey all.
This is my latest piece. At the moment still working on some mastering issues, but just thought id put it up to see what others think of it. Feedback, criticism and/or interest appreciated as always
Thanks Peeps. Link Below.
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May-15-2005 23:06
MegaMan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Toronto/Canada
k, nice melody and everything, sound like one of those tracks that paul van dyke would play, except that you need to boost your kick n bass a little bit, i can see this track developing into major floor mover
peace
May-15-2005 23:20
Frase
www.frase.org.uk
Registered: Feb 2003
Location: Coventry, Warwickshire
Awesome work man, i love it
May-16-2005 00:00
PDM
Legacy
Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA
Yes, is a good track melody sise.
I can hear why you say you are working on some mastering issues, that is good man, polish your track as much as you can, especially removing some hiss from it.
Registered: May 2005
Location: Nottinghamshire, UK
quote:
Originally posted by MegaMan
k, nice melody and everything, sound like one of those tracks that paul van dyke would play, except that you need to boost your kick n bass a little bit, i can see this track developing into major floor mover
peace
Cheers bigtime MegaMan love getting feedback, good or bad. esp. with technical elements. tracks can get so much better with the help of others advice now and again.
just adjusted the kick, made it more punchy. apparently this makes the bass flow a lot better too. ill post a snippet of the updated version tomorrow. see if u agree, if not ill try boostin the bassline too.
Thanks again anymore advice from others welcome.
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May-16-2005 01:36
Alekos
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: George is on
Awesome track.
It'd be great if you could post the full version
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May-16-2005 01:39
DarrenWilliams
tranceaddict in training
Registered: May 2005
Location: Nottinghamshire, UK
quote:
Originally posted by PDM
Yes, is a good track melody sise.
I can hear why you say you are working on some mastering issues, that is good man, polish your track as much as you can, especially removing some hiss from it.
cheers dude. yeah i need to master this well bigtime. polishing a track is paramount these days definately.
the snip is 128kbps which makes it wishy woshy too. so updated snip will be 192 at least to give u guys more of a true picture.
u got any suggestions on the mastering side of things.
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May-16-2005 01:40
DarrenWilliams
tranceaddict in training
Registered: May 2005
Location: Nottinghamshire, UK
quote:
Originally posted by IKKI-ZUVK
Awesome track.
It'd be great if you could post the full version
cheers dude. glad you liked it sorry for not posting a full version. its purely to stop it getting leaked really. thats happened with a few folk this year already so ima steer clear of uploading full tracks.
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anymore advice from others welcome.
