Im wavy....this is the first time ive actually joined any forum to try and get some feedback on my music. ive been djing for a few years now and realised the production of my own tunes is really the way to go. With this tune, I took an acapella from a Danny Tenaglia track, cut it up some and added some delay to the vocal. then i wrote a little tune to go underneath. the vocal is not mine but the rest of the track is...
see what u all think anyway. Im not quite at the level of some producers on this site but im open to any help you give me on my production
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May-23-2005 15:40
websley
Senior tranceaddikt
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Helmond
Hi Davy,
First I've to say I like your website, the tune was easily found there.
Good energetic bass and rhythm. At 1:27, I advice you to give the track some more instruments. Maybe lateron, a string pad would be nice in that part The idea is very good, it's just a little too empty at the moment. If you decide that a string pad won't do, try adding some synth structures or arpeggios. At least after the second breakdown.
-weBs
May-24-2005 12:22
wavydalker
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2005
Location: Aylesbury
Thanx webs...ive noted your feedback. I think your right about that. I could do to take it up a level at the second breakdown.
Its good to receive a fresh point of view....sometimes you can get so lost in the production that some of the more obvious bits needed can be forgoton about.
cheers man
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May-25-2005 19:11
sooper
Beat Slut
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Toronto
Hey Davie,
I'm having a bit of trouble getting your tune. I can click on the link, but nothing happens, and I cannot right click & save the link. I am using IE.
Any suggestions?
thanks!
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May-25-2005 23:15
wavydalker
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2005
Location: Aylesbury
hi sooper,
Davie here,
u might need a flash player to access the page...if that fails i could email u it if u want...
i think it needs some work yet though
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May-26-2005 19:44
sooper
Beat Slut
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Toronto
quote:
Originally posted by wavydalker
hi sooper,
Davie here,
u might need a flash player to access the page...if that fails i could email u it if u want...
i think it needs some work yet though
Hey Davie - I got it to work! I had to paste the download link into a new browser, and that did the trick.
on the the review:
Your track has lots of drive and energy! I like the vocal sample.. very cool. I also like when you add the harmony to the bass.. i think its the bass. That's my one suggestion, boost the bass frequencies, as its a little low. Could be my headphones though
I love the break at 3:00.. and then into an amazing funky groove - my favourite part! Great use of f/x all around.
Fine work Davie! Its like trance/house, which is a cool combo.
I'm looking forward to hearing more of your stuff,
Trev
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