I hope to of made a dreamy synth kinda trance tune, please give me some feedback =)

i think the crash is a bit too loud and maybe i have over done the reverse percussions?? all feedback welcome.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/markr_music.htm (Languages, underneath 7th Heaven)

Last edited by mark_the_gooner on Jun-11-2005 at 20:38

listening,very good pad(aghhh)-I remember 1995 year trance....-nostalgic,oldy...
Rhytm-I don't like sounds(kinda primitive),when listening feels blocks.melody rocks....but sound is'nt good,need different sounds.In this track is to much space(sometimes only rhytm,when buildup,need snare rolls.
In synth sound is to much decay....
Nice tune(not promo-that is cool) PEACE


KEEEP Going

listenin right now....niceee pads at the beginnin'! Drums come in nicely, veery dreamy, maybe you could add little something to the drums, kick could be a bit louder or more present and percs could be a bit louder....

melody at about 4:20 is comin in...i was kinda expecting something bigger or more present, but it is o.k. - maybe it will become more present

It is more of a chilled out trancy tune (niiice at 5:50)...

I'd suggest you to work a bit more on the percs and try to use a few more sounds, synths but all in all it is a good track - it was worth listenin! Keep up the good work!!

btw which programs do u use and was that absynth for the pads??

Greetz, Sound Of Heaven

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Thanks for the comments guys.

The pads were made with Embracer (Comes with Cubase SX 2).

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sorry, the link doesn't work anymore. When it's back online I will surely post my comment.

sorry about that, this thread is quite old and i forgot i left it in my sig, but i edited the first post and u should see the link to the song now (that will be up permanently now)

If u see a 404 try refreshing.

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Last edited by mark_the_gooner on Jun-07-2005 at 19:46