Hello,

I must say you're really trying to create an atmosphere here. But it just sounds too "robotic" in a way. Try to play more with the panning and the gate effect. Dunno if you often listen to M.I.K.E.? Well, it's more the effects that he uses that can make such a track have a thumping feel and sound really creepy. Especially the reverb is lacking here. Maybe some more melodic layers would be nice in this one too.

-weBs

Know what you mean..

Took the inspiration from Richie Hawtin really. Love his stuff.

Did it all in 1 program too, Fruity loops, and Live.

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I'm diggin' it!

Hey. I'm not going to post a full review of the track but its got some serious potential. If you would like to collab on it or if you want some real-time pointers on it, I'd love to help. ([email protected])

Cheers,
Zac

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Feel free to have a play with the track, do a remix etc, would love to hear different takes on it.

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Hey. Cool, any chance I can get the project file or atleast a MIDI? I use FL Studio 5 and it would be best if you could get me an FLP but a MIDI file would be more than substantial . I really want to work on this song though . I have MSN Messenger that I mainly use but also have AIM (LDarkLSwordL) and YIM (iDarkiSwordi) so you can drop me a line at one of those and we can discuss it .

Cheers,
Zac

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DarkSword - Hell Bound
DarkSword - Fresh
DarkSword - Styled
DarkSword - Shadowed Sun
DarkSword - Turning Forward
DarkSword - ALLFRUIT
Pacific Mint vs DarkSword - Climax Zone 2005
SoundClick Page

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Yes, I'm definitely hearing the Richie Hawtin influences.

Not a very high energy track, but I don't think it needs to be. It serves its purpose in being very trippy. I like it.

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This is really your first track? That's amazing! The first thing I made sounded like absolute shit. It wouldn't fit into any genre know to man. This is actually quite nice! I can tell, you're gonna get really good at this buddy!

Yeah, what he said

Nice minimalist track. Good synth programming too!

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not bad,as someone here said you have lot of potential

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Crikkey, this response has shocked me, I thought it was quite lame.

Listening back to it over and over, the more I hate it.

I'll post the FL link thing and anyone with FL can have a play with it.

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Simple.