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Alright, some quick comments about your track, even though I havent heard the orginal:
- It's kind of messy arrangement
- The rythms are nicely done
- The 303-part kind of doesn't fit with the rest of the style IMO
- Maybe try some sawsounds insted of what I would call a bit "pling plong" vst sounds
- It gets a bit too much around 4:40 with all those melodys and fx.
Well, it has potential, but I can't see this track beeing near to the quality of you other productions...
Keep it up!
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Hawk aka HKN/Air Breeze
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