Hey.

-Great chord at the beginning. Sounds mellotron like .
-The percussion is decent. I think the surrounding percussion (taps and whatnot) could use a bit of a volume boost.
-The bassline is ok. Its a bit muted. Try adding some resonance into it so its more audible. You might also apply a chorus or something to expand the sound to be more fat. It just seems a bit dry right now.
-Good synth string. Its very well placed.
-Mmm . The piano is great.
-The break is good here but the bassline seems to clash a little with some of the notes, especially around the 5m mark.

Overall, decent track. I'm always a sucker for songs that bring in a lot of Disco elements . One thing you might also try, if thats what you were truely going for, is a bass guitar vst like reFX Slayer 2 or if you are using FLStudio, the BooBass plugin is a very nice bass emulator. This would give it a much more disco feel and personly, a better sound in my opinion . Good mellow song.
Grade A

Cheers,
Zac

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Thanks mate, true about the bass clashing, Ii think i forgot to deleted another bass pattern and that's why sometimes clashes, also gonna boost a bit more the bass :=.
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Very chilled, I like the style... Things you might wanna add: some more variation in the percussion when the track progresses. Around 4:00 I have the feeling the bass is not fitting in. And as said above, the bassline is a bit muted. For the rest more than decent!

mastering could be better.

2.19 dont like that progression of the bass.

everything sounds nice, but the mix sounds so hibernating. compress, mix it a bit harder etc.

Piano is really nice, i also like the rhodes ,

nice small fx used

I grade it 7/10.

can be better

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Hi Kopi

You must change bassline, becouse not adjust in this style!!
Pads are simply, piano melody is fine, we are by-the-way melodys??

Overall not bad!!

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Yo kopi my man
isn't yousendit great lo..
just listening.. really good chill tune,
something you'd want on the radio when your relaxing on the beach !
just take a look @ the bassline.. its the only thing that would need some attention, and maybe make the shakers a bit more clear.. th clap is really good !
overall: lovely

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Thanks to all for ur feedback .
I fixed the bass, added a new one, actually two basses layereds, compressed the whole shit, and fixed some other details, thanks in advance!
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Dude, this song kicks ass...reminds me a bit of Janeiro, hehe. Only thing I REALLY dislike is that bassline...sounds too open...can you close the cut-off a wee bit and lower the decay a little so it's more stabby and tight? Everything else I'm not even gonna complain...the track is nice as heck!

Hey man very thanks for the feedback, I am having a real bad moment fixing the bass line , I will be awake whole night trying diferent styles of bass .
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