Hi everyone,


well...uhmm...check this out pleeeze:

http://oehoe18.mine.nu/~deekay/newproduction4.mp3

feedback appreciated

Nice track, I am loving how everything flows back into it at 2:40
and the background effects

Quality! Keep up the good work

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nice one matt, already told u what i think

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Very sweet track indeed man! I am really digging this totally my kind of stuff .
Kopi =o.

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Hey.

-Good work on the rim shots. Adds a lot of ambience to the song.
-Excellent bassline and bassdrum as well as the rest of the percussion.
-Great work on the pads. They flow very nicely behind the rest of the song.
-Good vocal burst in the break-out and I guess throughout the break .
-Good synth work. The piano especially adds a lot to the track.
-The break-in, I was a little worried at first when u layed a straight 4x4 kick in without an explosive entrance back into the track but I was set straight a few measures later .

Overall, a VERY good track. I will be shocked if I dont hear this on ASOT in the near future. The only thing that dissapointed me was a lack of a steardy, driving melody, but then again, you never said this was supposed to be trance .
Grade A (Top Notch!)

Cheers,
Zac

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quote:

Originally posted by IDarkISwordI The only thing that dissapointed me was a lack of a steardy, driving melody, but then again, you never said this was supposed to be trance

Yeah, but still youre right somehow.
It indeed needs a decent melody with a decent lead instrument.
Still working on that. It's probably the hardest part
Finding a good melody without making it sound too cheesy

no objection, this tune is absolutely pro dude. when the break comes in the track starts to sound very beautifull / harmonic to my ear. anyway, you should add some elemtents that make it sound more unique.

This is mint Matt. Downloaded it the otherday and it just came on my winamp now. Goddam I'm annoyed that you didnt name the mp3 though lol! I've just spent 20 mins looking for this thread so I could tell the producer how good it was!

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